In a commentary, “Republicans
Have Done Real Damage to the Economy,” Dave Johnson goes over the past, present, and
future damages of the government shutdown. The repercussions of the shutdown are being
brought into the spotlight, and Johnson is pointing the blame at the
Republicans.
The targeted audience of
the commentary would be those who oppose the Republican Party. This is because
Johnson’s argument specifically attacks the Republicans. The argument being
made is that because of the selfish powers of the Republican Party, consumer
confidence levels take a plunge, which further damage our beaten up economy.
Johnson immediately attacks
the Republicans by claiming: “Republicans believe that a bad economy works for
them at election time.” He gives evidence of the past and present damages
caused by the government shutdown. His first point is that in 2011 when the
Republicans threatened to send the country into default, the consumer
confidence took a plunge. He claims,
“In Debt-Ceiling Déjà Vu Could
Sink Economy” Bloomberg reported that, “Growth in nonfarm payrolls
decelerated to an average 88,000 a month during the three months of the
debt-ceiling impasse, compared with an average of 176,000 in the first five
months of 2011.” Consumer confidence plunged to a 31-year low.” Johnson then goes
on to discuss the damages done by this year’s government shutdown. He begins by
stating this year the damages are far worse than the damages done in 2011. For
example, “Standard & Poor’s ratings agency has done some early calculations
of the damage and says, “the shutdown has shaved at least 0.6% off of annualized
fourth-quarter 2013 GDP growth, or taken $24 billion out of the economy.” He
goes on even further and blames the Republicans for “the 2013 job-loss from the
sequester cuts to be estimated at only 800,000 jobs, but the 2014 job-loss is
estimated to be 1.6 million.” These are just a handful of studies that Johnson
uses to put the damage of the economy on the Republicans’ back.
Johnson uses great sources such as: “The
New York Times,” The Government Accountability Office, The Bipartisan Center,
and many more that provide good evidence and studies. These sources help his
credibility, however, the only thing hindering Johnson’s argument is his very
biased view. First off, the commentary is a “left-leaning liberal blog.”
Secondly, the way he points the blame at the Republicans is in a very disliking
tone. For example, “Republicans have been obstructing…everything,” “That’s just
those two pieces of Republican damage
to our economy,” and “Republicans still have one power: the power to destroy. And
they will use that power until we take it away from them.” This is the only
reason why Johnson’s credibility gets knocked.
Overall,
his commentary proposes an overall successful argument. He provides good use of
studies that show solid evidence of the damage done to the economy. Although,
he is using an extremely biased view, the evidence shows that due to the
Republicans threatening and actually shutting down the government, they caused
our GDP to fall up to 4% and cause the economy to take a tremendous plunge.