Let me start
off by saying I 100% agree with her argument being made. Why? Because I am her targeted audience and what she is
saying applies to my life as well. I had no idea tuitions were rising again on
July 1st, nor did I know that the federal government profits from
student loans, although; that doesn’t surprise me that they have their hands in
the student loans. Maria is completely right that the increase in tuition rates
and interest rates are outrageous. All that will do is: add more numbers to the
category of those who can’t afford to pay off their student loans after
college, and scare more people away from college.
The only thing I would
add to her argument is the use of links to sites with data about student loans,
tuition rates, and government profits from student loans. This way her facts don’t
seem as if they are just coming from the air, it also establishes more
credibility. Other than that, there are no further revisions needed. All of her
targeted audience, college students, will agree that these increased rates and
tuitions are hurting us. America can’t preach and stress enough of how valuable
education is to our country. Yet, we continue to raise tuition prices and
interest rates? Yeah, that makes sense.
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